हे जीव जगत के मनुज सुन……..
Posted by Hem Jyotsana "Deep" on जुलाई 27, 2007
हे जीव जगत के मनुज सुन ,
तू बलशाली है थक हार नही ।
जीत तेरी हर सुबह होगी ,
मानेगा जब तक तू हार नहीं ।
माना है रस्ता पथरीला ,
तू पल पल इसे निहार नहीं ।
तू सफल नहीं है आज मगर,
खुद को असफल स्वीकार नहीं ।
है अदम्य साहस का मालिक ,
ड़रना तेरा व्यवहार नहीं ।
तू रखता है शस्त्र हौसला ,
घबराना तेरा प्रहार नहीं ।
ज़श्न विजय पर गाने वाले ,
ईद दिवाली ही तेरा त्यौहार नहीं ।
पाना खोना खेल है जीवन ,
दर्द ही इसका सार नहीं ।
Prem Piyush said
अच्छी लगी आशावादी पंक्तियाँ । सरल शब्दों में प्यारी सी है ।
यूँ लगता है –
अब सुबह देर नहीं,
राही अब अँधेर नहीं ।
समीर लाल said
बढ़िया संदेश. बधाई.
paramjitbali said
बढिया रचना है।
sandeep Aatm said
बढ़िया संदेश
बढिया रचना
nice meassage
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Mukund said
I’ve no words, I don’t know how to appreciate your poem. Thanks.
Shashikant said
Bahut Encouraging Kavita hai Hem Jyotsna , Keep it up.
-Shashikant
Ramesh Sachdeva said
Dear Jyotsana,
Poem : Hey Jeev Jagat ke ……….
I am very glad to read this poem. Can I display it in my school. I hope it is message for Teachers and Students and very encourging one.
Yes it is the poem. I will like to receive poem from time to time when you like and pen any new one.
Thansk a lot.
Wish you all the best.
Ramesh Sachdeva
Director
HPS Sr. Sec. School,
M. Dabwali (sirsa)-Haryana
Garima Joshi said
Wah!! Wah!! Hem, teri kavita ki jitni prashansa ki jaye utni kam hai.. You have always been a source of inspiration to friends.. And now with ur writings u r extending the source to so many … It’s so nice to have a poet friend like you. Wishing you success and happiness…
COngratulations on completing century of poems.. Way to Go!!!! Hope U’ll get world recognition soon
अरुण सक्सेना said
बहुत उम्दा. आपकी कविया अति उत्साहवर्द्धक है. आशा करता हूँ और उत्तम लिखो — अरुण सक्सेना
Satish Chandra satyarthi said
बहुत ही उत्साह वर्धक कविता.
मानव जब जोर लगाता है
पत्थर पानी बन जाता है.
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ashneet said
i love the poem. recently, i was depressed while swithing on the site. after going through the poem i feel more relaxed. it has given me the strenth to fight the situation i am sufering from. the poem has it’s own emotional touch but only the toched can understand it, feel it
Mithilesh Kumar Roy said
i read poem design by u. i m so happy because your poem is very beautiful in my life
kindly request u please u wrote more and more poem for us.
“mai apko apna ek lakshya samajh liya aur mai god se pray karunga ki wo apko salamat rakhen taki ap hamare liye dher sare kavitayen likhti rahen.”
“mere aur mere family ki taraf se apko dher sari shubh kamnaen”
regards,
Mithilesh
Patna
Bhavish said
hi….beautiful
Brajesh Bhatia said
Xcellent !
Can I spread it on poster wth your name.
I am in Pharma co.
servesh dubey said
Atti Uttam
Joshi. D.N said
kavita ki kya tarif karain, kavita ke sar ko samajhana bahut jaruri hai, jo har koi agar apne jevan main utare to safalta jaroor milegi, A nice poem.
abhishek said
kavita ki kya tarif karain, kavita ke sar ko samajhana bahut jaruri hai, jo har koi agar apne jevan main utare to safalta jaroor milegi, A nice poem.